tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2153888337668314458.post4083371560187358290..comments2024-03-05T14:03:08.208-06:00Comments on Bite and Smile with Joe Janes: Week 38, Day 261 - "Baby Milosh"Joe Janeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05858974237565248026noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2153888337668314458.post-24495048540894488042009-10-09T00:38:41.118-05:002009-10-09T00:38:41.118-05:00You don't know who I am.You don't know who I am.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2153888337668314458.post-18517043183642676152009-10-07T18:14:12.643-05:002009-10-07T18:14:12.643-05:00Chris - I went with a different spelling because I...Chris - I went with a different spelling because I know how lawsuit happy Baby Milosch can be.<br /><br />Anon - I totally welcome feedback of all kinds. Even if it involves an adult man in a diaper biting into another man's boob and drawing blood. I know who you are and I will use this against you.Joe Janeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05858974237565248026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2153888337668314458.post-3902839800565778652009-10-07T12:09:43.686-05:002009-10-07T12:09:43.686-05:00Eww, I'm not sure about this one. I don't ...Eww, I'm not sure about this one. I don't find the monologue that convincing, though it's funny. I think it would feel more real if you made it a deconstruction scene of a simple yet complicated thing like quieting baby, and there needs to be more of Claire in the scene, with the trigger being a baby's cries, and each time the baby cries it takes Kevin out of the realm with Claire, and spotlight on his aside thoughts about the baby, broken up, rather having them shared all at once in one uninterrupted block kind of like this maybe or maybe not constructive critical paragraph that was or wasn't solicited, though by posting a blog like this you do incite folks that like to give feedback. <br /><br />Also, I see the image of a large man with a shaved chest and a diaper in a crib being the baby. And I see the word "teeth" being shouted by Kevin as he looks at Claire and finally understands that breast feeding is painful, which could be even more funny when the baby realizes that Kevin's man-boobs are full of blood, not milk. I'm going to be "Anon" on this one since I sound a bit off center here!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2153888337668314458.post-52408486777219352212009-10-07T09:32:51.613-05:002009-10-07T09:32:51.613-05:00Milosh! Seinfeld!
(The tennis instructor who trie...Milosh! Seinfeld!<br /><br />(The tennis instructor who tried to trade his wife for Jerry's silence about his poor tennis playing.)Rob Biesenbachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13681772034441150865noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2153888337668314458.post-6987649512093191212009-10-07T09:21:24.385-05:002009-10-07T09:21:24.385-05:00Ewwwwww! A father's love.
I liked this one.
...Ewwwwww! A father's love.<br /><br />I liked this one.<br /><br />It reminds of my brother when one of his kids was a baby. The kid wouldn't stop crying and he didn't have a pacifier, so he let the kid suck on his finger. It seemed kind of odd, but you couldn't argue with the results. The kid shut up immediately.<br /><br />And not that it matters but Milosh should be spelled Milosch. (If it's the same Baby Milosch I know.)Chris Othichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17749643560107203860noreply@blogger.com