tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2153888337668314458.post5221698748686456139..comments2024-03-05T14:03:08.208-06:00Comments on Bite and Smile with Joe Janes: Week Two, Day Eight - "Pushing the Envelope"Joe Janeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05858974237565248026noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2153888337668314458.post-41820062573193546522009-01-27T16:53:00.000-06:002009-01-27T16:53:00.000-06:00Brilliant suggestion, Henri!- Tyranosaurus Adronic...Brilliant suggestion, Henri!<BR/><BR/>- Tyranosaurus AdronicusJoe Janeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05858974237565248026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2153888337668314458.post-92214268063808593302009-01-27T14:12:00.000-06:002009-01-27T14:12:00.000-06:00Asshole line edit:FROM:The stuff guts are wrenched...Asshole line edit:<BR/>FROM:<BR/>The stuff guts are wrenched from.<BR/>TO:<BR/>The stuff from which guts are wrenched!<BR/><BR/>Only cause it makes him and me more of an asshole.<BR/>Oh, an thanks for telling eveyone about my movie/theater ideas in this piece. Now i have to start again with Dinosaur Shakespeare...DAMNIT, now I've screwed myself too!<BR/><BR/>I'll get you ZedJoe!Henri Dugas IVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02735307277956629037noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2153888337668314458.post-67650609819284803252009-01-27T13:23:00.000-06:002009-01-27T13:23:00.000-06:00Permission granted. It would be an honr. Send me a...Permission granted. It would be an honr. Send me a video!Joe Janeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05858974237565248026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2153888337668314458.post-55053168028905416632009-01-27T12:30:00.000-06:002009-01-27T12:30:00.000-06:00Permission to steal for auditioning, sir?Permission to steal for auditioning, sir?Crustodiohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13981606386577495758noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2153888337668314458.post-23243812078598372542009-01-27T09:54:00.000-06:002009-01-27T09:54:00.000-06:00I like where this one went at the end, and there w...I like where this one went at the end, and there was lots of good stuff along the way. <BR/><BR/>One idea: If he's in a job interview as we see at the end, it could be fun to have it slowly dawn on us through the kinds of questions he's being asked by the offstage character. The questions could become more and more "job interview-y" as they went on. Starting with the implied one you already have "Please tell me about your life in the theatre," and progressing to "Have you used a cash register before?"GWhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07069762762795165026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2153888337668314458.post-68099620271900303342009-01-27T09:50:00.000-06:002009-01-27T09:50:00.000-06:00My favorite so far. I really liked Trey's voice i...My favorite so far. I really liked Trey's voice in this piece. Although I think he would look down on Andrew Lloyd Webber--"Puts 'him' in good company."<BR/><BR/>I've never had much success at writing monologues, but I think this is a good piece to use as an example. The character is talking to someone else in the room, he wants something, has a clear voice, and it tells a story.<BR/><BR/>Nicely done, Mr. Janes.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2153888337668314458.post-16029680161862343562009-01-27T04:28:00.000-06:002009-01-27T04:28:00.000-06:00Thank you for the insightful look at a true thee-a...Thank you for the insightful look at a true thee-ah-tah man.<BR/><BR/><B>Please ignore</B>idjarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09543470902651379423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2153888337668314458.post-6749064427042878832009-01-27T04:22:00.000-06:002009-01-27T04:22:00.000-06:00This comment has been removed by the author.idjarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09543470902651379423noreply@blogger.com