Sunday, April 12, 2009

Week 12, Day 83 - "An Affair to Whatever"

(This is Saturday's sketch)

"An Affair to Whatever"
Written by Joe Janes
4/11/09
83 of 365

CAST:
Mark, 40s
Daphne, 40s

(Lights up on Daphne already in bed, reading a book. Mark is taking off his watch and setting it on the nightstand on his side of the bed. He climbs in to bed.)

MARK
So, does your husband think you're working an extra shift at the hospital?

DAPHNE
Yeah.

MARK
My wife think's I'm in Houston on business.

(They look at each other.)

MARK (continuing)
Well, goodnight.

DAPHNE
Goodnight.

(They both turn off the lights near their sides of the bed. A moment later, Daphne's light turns back on.)

DAPHNE
I think the passion's gone out of our affair.

MARK
Can we talk about this in the morning?

DAPHNE
Yeah. Okay.

(She turns off the light.)

3 comments:

idjar said...

I dunno, seems pretty unrealistic. Probably only happens to every other couple having an affair. They should be in separate beds.

mark krause said...

are these two married to eachother?sounds like an old married couple to me, need more substance. by the way happy easter. I had a good night last night first time i drank with my oldest son(age 22) felt it this morning but good time.

GW said...

I really like this one. I admire that you made it a blackout even though the premise is enough to make a whole scene.