Friday, June 19, 2009

Week 22, day 152 - “Don’t Ask, Don’t Shout It Out Loud”

“Don’t Ask, Don’t Shout It Out Loud”
Written by Joe Janes
6/19/09
152 of 365

CAST
Tracey, 40s
Paula, 40s
Spencer, 30s
Shimmerman, 50s

(Lights up on Tracy, Paula, Shimmerman and Spencer sitting around Tracey’s living room in Omaha, Nebraska. They all wear KISS t-shirts and buttons. )

TRACEY
So far, we have accumulated 132 signatures for our petition to have KISS play Omaha. That’s not bad, but we have to do better if we want them to take us seriously. Who do you know?

PAULA
Yeah, guys. We can’t just rely on our KISS Army – Omaha MySpace page to do all our work.

SPENCER
We’ve got to mobilize. Maybe we can hit the market on Saturday and get signatures in the parking lot.

TRACEY
Now you’re thinking. What about you, Shimmerman?

PAULA
Yeah, you’ve been quiet the whole meeting.

SHIMMERMAN
I’m waiting for the next item on the agenda.

TRACEY
Look, man, I told you I wasn’t cool with that.

SHIMMERMAN
Fine. Then get to the item after that.

TRACEY (sighs)
Okay. (Looks at clipboard) Does anybody have any new business? (Shimmerman raises his hand.) Okay, let’s move on to rocking out-

SPENCER
Shimmerman has his hand up.

TRACEY
All right, Shimmerman. What is your new business?

SHIMMERMAN
We need to talk about Spencer.

SPENCER
Me?

SHIMMERMAN
Yes. This is the KISS Army. I have been a member in good standing since 1982.

TRACEY
You did have that two-year lapse in the late 80s.

SHIMMERMAN
That was a Peter Criss sympathy binge. My heart was still with the KISS Army.

SPENCER
I haven’t been a KISS solider as long as you, but I’m still in good standing, aren’t I? 75 of those petition signatures are from me.

SHIMMERMAN
This is not about who you are on record, Spencer. It’s about who you are behind closed doors.

PAULA
Dude. Are you dealing drugs?

SPENCER
I’m a pharmacist. I deal drugs openly.

SHIMMERMAN
There’s something else you do openly, Spencer. Last Saturday, I was on my way to the military surplus store to buy some camouflage pants with matching vest when my path was blocked by a parade. A gay pride parade.

PAULA
Omaha has a gay pride parade?

SHIMMERMAN
Apparently. And guess who was I saw on the lead float decked out in his Peter Criss outfit?

SPENCER
What I do in my free time is my business.

SHIMMERMAN
It would be if you weren’t a member of the KISS Army which is a role we all take seriously 24/7.

TRACEY
We do have rules, Spencer.

SPENCER
Is there a rule against being gay?

SHIMMERMAN
You took the pledge. “I pledge allegiance to the state of rock and roll/I promise to rock and roll all night and party every day/Cuz girl, I was made for you and girl, you were made for me/I was made for loving you, the KISS Army/Under God.” There is a clear reference to “I was made for you and “girl” you were made for me.”

SPENCER
Could mean two girls, which would be gay.

SHIMMERMAN
Gay, but hot. Not two guys gay, which is not hot.

SPENCER
To you. Does everyone feel this way?

TRACEY
I don’t know, Spencer. I’ve never had this come up.

PAULA
Spencer’s done great things for this group. He made us these cool matching patches. He jammed on that eBay auction to get us that Gene Simmon’s autographed bottle of hair dye. We shouldn’t be kicking him out because we don’t agree with his personal life.

SHIMMERMAN
I was against you being in the KISS Army, Paula. KISS is a man’s band. They wear manly bare-chested sequined outfits. They wear manly make-up emulating demons and star children and kitty cats. They sing about rocking hard and having bountiful sex with women. But you’re Tracey’s girlfriend and it is his basement, so, I shut up about it. But I have to put my foot down. There’s no room in the KISS Army for gays.

TRACEY
I say we put it to a vote. All those in favor of Spencer staying in the KISS Army, raise your hand. (Tracey raises his hand, Paula raises her hand, Spencer raises his hand.)

SHIMMERMAN
You can’t go changing the rules of rock and roll just because you don’t like them.

PAULA
If you don’t like it, you can leave.

TRACEY
It’s our infantry. We can call our own shots. Give us back your patch.

(Shimmerman rips the patch off his sleeve and throws it on the table.)

SHIMMERMAN
Fine. I’ll go join the Lincoln division. They have real men with real love guns who aren’t afraid to use them. (He heads towards the door and turns) That sounded gayer than I intended it to.

(He exits)

SPENCER
I’m really sorry. I didn’t think…. I never meant to break up our group.

TRACEY
We’ll be okay, Spencer. Why don’t you lead us in our closing prayer.

(They circle and bow their heads)


ALL
I know life sometimes can get tough. And I know life sometimes can be a drag. But people, we have been given a gift; we have been given a road. And that roads name is... rock and roll!

PAULA
I never noticed that “drag” word in there before.

(Blackout)

2 comments:

idjar said...

Is it just me, or are you getting better and better?

To be clear, your manly love guns of writing skills were pretty damn good to begin with.

Yep, no way to say "love gun" in a non-gay way.

Joe Janes said...

Thanks. I don't know about the better and better part, but I do think I've become really good at producing fairly complete first drafts.